Friday, May 8, 2015

the next video that i saw was Miriam. In her video it was really good one thing that could of done better is a slower sequence of the words, also lowering the music volume in order to hear what people are saying a little bit more. overall transitions were good but could have flowed better and been more constant.  her video was to the point and funny at some parts. overall a very good job.
When looking at yousef's presentation video or farewell video i noticed that transitions could have been a little bit more cleaner. and more detail be put into the video like adding a scene where we see the papers they are studying for and continually see more of the sequence of how everything came to pass.